Miriam Spitzer Franklin - Kid Lit Editorial

Editorial Feedback!

 

As a 3-time published and agented author, I have learned a lot about the craft of writing AND the craft of preparing your manuscript for submission. In addition to writing, I have also spent many years giving feedback to critique partners and participating in critique groups, along with being a mentor for PitchWars and Author Mentor Match. 

 

The path to publication starts by getting your work in front of an agent. You may be an amazing writer but first you have to grab an agent's attention by writing an irresistible query letter, then hook them with your opening pages.

 

I'd love to help you make your submission package SHINE!

 

Services:

 

Query only (inline notes + a second read of the revision)

 

Synopsis only (inline notes)

 

Ten Pages (inline notes + Big Picture feedback)

 

Submission Package (Query + Synopsis + 10 Pages) 

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Editorial Assessment (Editorial Letter on Big Picture Elements of the Manuscript Addressing Areas such as Plot, Pacing, Characterization, Themes, Voice, Setting)

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Developmental Edit (Editorial Letter + notes within the text)

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Book Coaching (Hourly Sessions to help brainstorm/ provide structure/ develop a first draft or work through issues if you're struggling to move your story forward!) 

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Please contact me about rates! I'm happy to answer any questions about my services.

 

TESTIMONIALS

 

"I feel very fortunate to have received a critique from Miriam Spitzer Franklin for one of my middle-grade manuscripts. Her astute comments, both in-line and big-picture, helped me bring my story to the next level. As a critiquer, Miriam is both candid and kind, which is the perfect combination to give you the tools to improve your writing while also bolstering your confidence by pointing out your strengths."

---Jenny Mattern, MG writer repped by Nicole Eisenbraun of Ginger Clark Literary

 

"Not only is Miriam Spitzer Franklin an accomplished author in her own right, she's also an excellent critiquer/editor. Being character-driven herself, she has a strong sense of what makes a character relatable to readers and how to strengthen that relatability. She's excellent at articulating what's working with characters in addition to finding areas for improvement.

With regards to plot, pace, and tension, Miriam asks all the right questions to hone in on the biggest story structure issues. Having traditionally published three middle grade novels, Miriam has a deep knowledge of the market which translates to exceptional query and synopsis skills. I trust Miriam's suggestions as being grounded in real-world experience. i appreciate her positive approach that tells me what I've done well. Whenever Miriam critiques my work, my revisions always show improvement. Miriam is a fabulous mentor to other writers. I highly recommend all of her services."

---Kristi Wright, MG writer repped by Molly Root

 

"As a published author with experience mentoring through Author Mentor Match, Miriam approaches critiquing with an eye for plot, and a wealth of writing craft knowledge. When Miriam gives feedback I can always be sure it's going to result in solid suggestions I can trust. She gives a mix of encouragement and critique that I've found inspire me to push my craft to the next level while also suggesting ways to deepen and better connect my writing. I highly recommend Miriam's developmental editing skills. 

--Christiana Doucette, MG writer repped by Leslie Zampetti of Dunham Literary